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American Author Dan McNay, Beyond Baroque/Venice/California, Fiction Workshop/Los Angeles/California, U.S. Equal Rights Amendment (ERA), Work in progress, Writers' Critique Group
I’ve been blessed in being part of a supportive writers’ critique group comprised of accomplished writers. Over the past five years, we’ve met once a month at a local restaurant. Our numbers have fluctuated between four to six writers with work in progress. But things don’t always work out the way we would like them to. Life happens. We have other pressing needs besides our writing.
With our active members now down to two of us, we’ve begun frequenting the Monday Night Fiction Workshop held at Beyond Baroque, a Literary | Arts Center in Venice, Los Angeles County. As I struggle with the first draft of my current writing project, I’ve found the fresh voices stimulating and motivating to keep pressing forward.
Instead of a third novel, to be set in Brazil, as planned, I’ve decided to explore the theme of the woman as a social construct. The minority male elite–not forgetting the women who support them–who control our global capitalist economic system are leading the human species, along with non-human species, towards extinction. Women play a vital role in maintaining the profitability of this system. If we are to reverse course, the role of women in society urgently needs to be re-examined.
While we’ve made lots of progress over the decades, women in America remain far from being treated as equals before the God in whom our nation has placed its trust. On February 21, 2020, I learned that five Republican attorneys general in Alabama, Louisiana, Nebraska, South Dakota, and Tennessee are seeking to block an effort by three Democratic-led states to see the Equal Rights Amendment (ERA) adopted in the U.S. Constitution.
Amid the gloom, I received news of another Five-Star Review on Amazon. This one is from American author, Dan McNay, who lives in Los Angeles, Southern California.
More Praise for Under the Tamarind Tree: A Novel by Rosaliene Bacchus
5.0 out of 5 stars Fantastic Book
February 15, 2020
Format: Kindle Edition
Under The Tamarind Tree by Rosaliene Bacchus. Published by Lulu 2019 is sweeping grand drama about Richard Cheong’s life set against the troubled history of Guyana gaining its freedom from Great Britain. We are quickly drawn into Richard’s life in 1950 with the birth of his first child. He is the good father, fighting against the times and convoluted half hidden histories of an extended family and the sad efforts of his parents and siblings to even act like decent human beings. He survives and takes care of those he loves without help from anyone, including a wife he loves and loses and distant sisters who have no patience for him. His trials are a reflection of the world around him in the emerging nation, with all of its political and racial violence and plots and demons racing the streets to destroy them. He will succeed and survive in the end because that is all he knows, even though he is also driven by demons of his own.
We are given the wonderfully exotic world of Guyana and its cultural diversity and incredible mix of ethnicity and religion. And it is alive and teems about the reader like a maelstrom of a fantastic world. This book is a joy to read and it will make you cry, so beware. I guarantee you won’t want to put it down.
~ Author Dan McNay, Los Angeles, California, USA
Richard Cheong believed that he had control over his life; that everything would work out according to his plans. But the changing world outside his home upended his dreams.
Dear Reader, my debut novel, Under the Tamarind Tree, is available at Rosaliene’s Store on Lulu.com and other book retailers at Amazon, BAM! Book-A-Million, Barnes and Noble, Book Depository, and Indie Bound.
Learn more about Under the Tamarind Tree at Rosaliene’s writer’s website.
Thank you for the news that five Republican attorneys general in Alabama, Louisiana, Nebraska, South Dakota, and Tennessee are trying hard to turn back time, as the song says.
To an outsider, there seem to be a lot of American people still stuck in the past, trying hard to keep everything the same as it was a very long time ago.
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Thanks for adding your voice, John. Adapting to change is difficult to begin with. Worse yet, when those changes threaten the privileges we have enjoyed for centuries or our religious values.
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Your paragraph about men leading us to extinction is chillingly accurate. I wish you well with the next book. The review is one to treasure.
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Thanks, Derrick. I treasure each review 🙂
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Oh my God, so true. Wonderful post.❤️
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Thanks, Laleh 🙂
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My pleasure.🌷
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts!!.. I am sure that what you pen will be wonderful indeed “I alone cannot change the world, but I can cast a stone across the waters to create many ripples.” ( Mother Teresa)… 🙂
Yes, there are elements of the world’s societies (not only men) who are closed minded and deny change or reality..“When we begin to build walls of prejudice, hatred, pride, and self-indulgence around ourselves, we are more surely imprisoned than any prisoner behind concrete walls and iron bars.” (Mother Angelica)… 🙂
However dear lady, I am sure that if you continue to let your fingers do the walking (typing) and your heart do the talking there will be hope…“Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul – and sings the tunes without the words – and never stops at all.” (Emily Dickinson)… 🙂
Until we meet again…
May flowers always line your path
and sunshine light your way,
May songbirds serenade your
every step along the way,
May a rainbow run beside you
in a sky that’s always blue,
And may happiness fill your heart
each day your whole life through.
May the sun shine all day long
Everything go right, nothing go wrong
May those you love bring love back to you
And may all the wishes you wish come true
May the dreams you hold dearest
Be those which come true
May the kindness you spread
Keep returning to you
(Irish Saying)
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I appreciate your well wishes, Dutch. Thank you ❤
Whatever our gender, we human beings are all in this together. There is, as yet, no Planet B.
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Another great review – congratulations!
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Thanks, Robert!
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Agreed! Congratulations!
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Thank you, Henry!
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A worthy project, Rosaliene. I’m sure it has found a worthy champion in you.
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Dr. Stein, I appreciate your confidence in my ability to complete this project. I hope that I’m up to the task.
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I am continually astounded that there is such opposition to the ERA. Or any opposition at all. That shows how far we still have to go.
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Sean, this issue is yet another one of our many battles for equality among our species.
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For all its claims of being “the most powerful country in the world” (sic) your adoptive land is sadly lacking in the most basic and common human decencies. America is the shining example of what greed and hubris does to a people. It will be interesting to watch (from a relatively safe place) how women, non-white minorities and the poor will fare under the next four years of the Trump regime.
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Sha’Tara, in our globalized world, no country is safe from the power elite who control the global economic capitalist system.
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Of course, that is a truism. I was just focusing on the fact that for at least a hundred years “America” has forcefully pushed its capitalism, racist and misogynist military, military bases, bad manners, vileness and violence, cheap food and crappy radio and TV entertainment upon a world as unsuspecting of its motives as were the natives who welcomed the first imperial invaders of their worlds. America claimed the right to be the moral leader in all respects and declared itself the policeman of the planet. The typical imperial prerogative. The world is now reaping the results of its naivety.
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Sounds like a great new project, Rosaliene. If you’re not already acquainted with her, I highly recommend Sylvia Federeci as a resource for the woman’s role under capitalism.
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Dr. Bramhall, thanks for the recommendation. I’ve read her book, Witches, Witch-Hunting and Women, but haven’t yet read any of her other works.
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A lovely review, Rosaliene. Richard sounds like a fascinating character, and I know shamefully little about Guyana’s history.
I love the sound of your new project, too. Good luck with it, and I’m looking forward to hearing more.
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Thanks, Cath. Glad you dropped by 🙂
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Thanks for the nomination 🙂
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Thanks for the reblog, Douglas. Much appreciated 🙂
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Your plan to write about women is important, crucial even. I look forward to it.
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Thanks, JoAnna 🙂 I’m still in the early stages of exploration of the theme.
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Well done! I just found a writing group that I’m enjoying — a good one is so good!
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It sure is!
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