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Blackness & Black women, Caribbean Region, Climate crisis in Caribbean, Haitian Revolution (1791-1804), Poem “Ex(ile)” by Desiree C. Bailey, Poetry Collection What Noise Against the Cane (2021) by Desiree C. Bailey, Slavery in French colony of Saint Domingue/Caribbean, Trinidadian-born Poet Desiree C. Bailey

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My Poetry Corner May 2022 features the poem “Ex(ile)” from the debut poetry collection What Noise Against the Cane by Desiree C. Bailey that won the 2020 Yale Series of Younger Poets Prize. Born in the Caribbean island-nation of Trinidad & Tobago, she was nine years old when she migrated with her family to the USA where she grew up in Queens, New York.
Bailey earned a BA from Georgetown University (Washington DC), an MFA in Fiction from Brown University (Rhode Island), and an MFA in Poetry from New York University. In Fall 2022, she will be the Writer-in-Residence at Clemson University (South Carolina).
In her interview with Corrine Collins for Air Light Magazine in September 2021, Bailey described her poetry collection What Noise Against the Cane as “a praise song to the ocean, Black people, Black women, the Caribbean, and struggles for liberation.” The first half of the collection is a long narrative poem titled “Chant for the Waters and Dirt and Blade,” written from the imagined perspective of a young, enslaved husk of girl orphaned at the ocean’s distant edge / before ship before humid choke of hull / before trade winds splintering [her] off into the world’s directions. With dreams of freedom, the girl joins other slaves in their fight for liberation during what became known as the Haitian Revolution (1791-1804): freedom: ruthless siren hurl and shriek / louder than a dream.

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The slave girl witnesses the French colonizers’ transformation of the beautiful island, then known as Saint-Domingue:
in this garden the white man veils his face from his gods shears the land for it to look like him in the leaves' tender shadow he poisons the soil with his spilling anger his barbed sorrow smell of a burning in the distance whispers of uprisings in faraway fields
Her memory of life before being sold into slavery fades with the grueling days in the cane fields: I don’t want / my flesh to remember but the stink / collect there mapping / a route to my head // I want memory to fail.
She would rather be forgotten than have children to suffer her fate: I won’t leave / no memento of me / if the great god grants me / one thing // no sons or daughters / to stock the mills / no sons or daughters / pockmarked with price // bark of weeping dragon blood tree / leaves of asosi and rue bitter tea / made to expel I pour myself // I drain the weight / the sale of my womb.
The second half of the collection contains individual poems. Most of them, written in the poet’s voice, ponders questions of diaspora, migration, and Blackness. While working on the book, Bailey realized how traumatic it was to have left her homeland at an early age to reunite with her father living in New York. She recalls the strangeness of her new home in the poem “First American Years,” where people treat them as backward or uneducated:
The new school wants to know if I can read cat, dog, hat. I think they think big words don't exist on islands. [...] Ma studies to assure America that she can do what she's done for years. Before this, she listened closely to hearts in utero. Guided the newcomers through canals.

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In the poem “Orfeu Negro / Black Orpheu,” Bailey grapples with her reactions to the 1959 film produced by French director Marcel Camus. Set in a favela in Rio de Janeiro during carnival, the film is an adaptation of the Greek legend of Orpheus and Eurydice. The film is rich in diversity of Black Brazilians, from poor blacks to blacks whirling gold thread for carnaval…
I too from masquerade land…. My island a speck, a globe of spit slipping past the eye of the world. So I watch Orfeu Negro greedy for a glimpse of myself…. My greed, my open mouth cares not for taste. I am almost ashamed…. O thirst of commerce, ever-sucking despite force of flow, pitching our flesh from port to port. Aren’t we charmed and exquisite, dancing as we’ve always danced, drenched in our cane-taint?
The featured ten-verse poem “Ex(ile)” draws attention to the Caribbean islands devastated by Hurricanes Irma and Maria in 2017. In the opening two verses, the speaker notes that news reports were more concerned with the destruction of tourist resorts and leisure boats than with the lives of Caribbean people: yachts smashed in the marina and water rising in hotel rooms. [Hurricane Maria took the lives of an estimated 4,645 Puerto Ricans.] Verses 3 and 4 capture the plight of the people:

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Bodies are piling up in the morgues and instead an elegy of boats an inventory of industry, countdown to when paradise can begin again. So it seems when we’re no longer property we become less than property a nail sick with rust, jangling in high winds.
For Caribbean island-nations in the path of supercharged hurricanes, the climate crisis is already a present reality. Yet, island nations and territories are left to fend for themselves. With external assistance comes more exploitation. People are forced into exile through migration or within their own homeland (verse 5): banished / in one’s own yard, barred / from the fruits of your mother’s land.
Inside ex(ile): tempests and fault lines are developers’ wet dreams. A mainland will sink its territory in debt starve its subjects in the wake of storms clearing ground for palaces on the shore.
In the final verse, the people turn to their gods for clemency and justice:
Spare our kin, we plead. Save your wrath for the profiteers. Cast them from our archipelago, our ile ife of the seas until home is a place we never have to leave.
To read the complete featured poem and learn more about the work of Desiree C. Bailey, go to my Poetry Corner May 2022.
powerful, beyond what I can say…. I will add this on my list to have, this is a must read, thank you so much. I’m so glad there are women who are unafraid to speak truth to power….. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😊🙏🏿🙏🏻💙💜
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Krissy, I’m so glad that you love Bailey’s poetry ❤ Her poetic vision is impactful.
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You have brought this very powerful poet so timely to my attention that I have recently featured gleaning from the cane harvest in Barbados and have been reading V. S. Naipaul – both of which you know, Rosaliene
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Derrick, I’m delighted that you’re reading V.S. Naipaul, one of the Caribbean’s finest writers. Like Bailey, he is also from Trinidad & Tobago. The photos you share on your blog of your visit to Barbados are not the usual ones we see that promote tourism on the island.
After the first import of African slaves in 1627, Barbados became the birthplace of British slave society. The Barbados Slave Code of 1661, known as “An Act for Better Ordering and Governing of Negroes,” established that enslaved African be treated as chattel. The Barbados Slave Code was adapted to Jamaica and other British colonies in the Caribbean, and even to the South Carolina colony as the legal basis for the treatment of African slaves in many parts of the British colonies in North America. Readers can learn more at the following link:
https://historyplex.com/purpose-significance-of-barbados-slave-code-of1661
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Thank you so much for this additional detail, Rosaliene. I wanted to show how the people of Barbados lived, not the rich tourists – but the contrast of their environment will come soon.
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“big words don’t exist on islands”… an ironic statement because in many West Indian islands such as, particularly, Jamaica, the standards in schools, both in achievement and in behaviour can be way higher than considerably better than comprehensive schools in, say, London, or other big English cities.
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John, thanks for raising this issue of high educational standards in the Caribbean. Speaking as a former British subject from what was then British Guiana until 1966, I can attest to the high quality of English language training we received in our public school system at the time. In high school, we had to attain the levels required by the Oxford & Cambridge as well as London General Certificate of Education (GCE) “O” Level and “A” Level.
The Caribbean Examinations Council (CXC) was established in 1972 across the region for assessing educational achievement at levels equivalent to the British GCE “O” Level and “A” Level. Readers can learn more at the following link: https://www.cxc.org/#
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Thank you for sharing!!.. unfortunately, in today’s world many think only of themselves and what the land can do for them and the plight and suffering of a family or a people doesn’t garner the headlines a resort, etc does… perhaps one day the human race will see the light…. 🙂
Until we meet again..
May your day be touched
by a bit of Irish luck,
Brightened by a song
in your heart,
And warmed by the smiles
of people you love.
(Irish Saying)
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Dutch, the day we humans see the light cannot come fast enough!
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There are parallels between the works you write about and the book I’m reading now. It’s a novel by Edwige Danticat titled Breath, Eyes, Memory, and is about a Haitian girl who is relocated to New York City. So far I like it quite a lot.
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Neil, I’m delighted to hear that you’re reading Danticat’s 1994 award-winning first novel. The Haitian-American author is one of the Caribbean’s finest literary writers. Glad that you’re enjoying her book 🙂
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So much misfortune and violence here. It is as if all those who haven’t been heard and are not being heard feel they must get louder and and more angry still to have a chance for justice and acceptance. I fear for where this is leading no matter the righteousness of the enormous numbers of those afflicted.
For some who might be responsive to the plea, they may turn away because they feel the world is just too much to bear.
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Dr. Stein, I’m glad that you’re not insensitive to the violence and anger expressed in Bailey’s poetry. Tensions are mounting in the Caribbean Region as can be seen in the “Open Letter to Prince William and the Duchess of Cambridge Kate” dated March 20, 2022 on their proposed visit to Jamaica. The opening paragraph describes well what all island-nations in the Caribbean are facing, not only Jamaica:
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Dear William and Kate:
We note with great concern your visit to our country Jamaica, during a period when we are still in the throes of a global pandemic and bracing for the full impact of another global crisis associated with the Russian/Ukraine war. Many Jamaicans are unaware of your visit as they struggle to cope with the horrendous fallout of the COVID-19 pandemic, exacerbated by pre-existing social and economic hardships inherited from our colonial past.
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Read more at the following link:
https://petchary.wordpress.com/2022/03/21/100-jamaican-individuals-and-organizations-sign-open-letter-to-william-and-kate-ahead-of-their-visit/
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Thank you, Rosaliene. As you understand, so much of the anger people are watching and experiencing follows from terrible wrongs. My worry concerns the cumulative effect of reaction upon reaction, wrong upon wrong, and sometimes misattribution upon misattritubtion and suspicion, with much of the violence justified by other violence and no end within sight.
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That’s amazing she does a variety of subjects from history, as well as the present
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Claire, Bailey’s collection is, indeed, amazing in traveling across time. What’s more, throughout the collection, we can see the link between the injustices of the past and the present.
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Very nice poem talked from experience! It’s always the case, Black people are always associated with poverty and the focus is not on them!
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AWV, that’s often the case when natural disasters strike.
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When I hear about a hurricane hitting an island to the south of me, it seems distant. I am thankful for Ex (ile) bringing the reality of human devastation closer and clearer.
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JoAnna, unlike the current plight of the Ukrainian people, our mainstream media rarely covers the devastation of hurricanes across the Caribbean Region in America’s backyard. Even Puerto Rico, an American territory, did not get the help they so desperately needed immediately in the aftermath of Hurricane Maria.
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Thank you for this awareness.
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Ah! Rosaliene, on this post you bring back memories from my days in LA for some years I had a Girlfriend there from Trinidad.
Black Orpheus a movie I saw many years ago at a revival theater in San Diego possibly in 1982, or so, I have seen the movie several times, I bought the old vinyl record from the music, still have it,but with no console to play it on it. Of course I can play it in YouTube, and I am listening to it right now! 😊
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So glad that my post has brought back good memories! I haven’t seen the movie, but I’m familiar with many of its musical hits.
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I love her work!!! Big on teaching about history but bringing up present day feelings.
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So glad that you appreciate Bailey’s poetry 🙂
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I’m glad Desiree Bailey is giving voice to the voiceless of the dead and lost at sea of the diaspora and the archipelago. Her work is an emotional history lesson, thanks for the introduction.
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My pleasure, Rebecca 🙂 An “emotional history lesson” describes her work well.
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A powerful voice, with wonderful rhythm. I feel a connection intuitively, yet , as one of your commenters noted, there is a sense of fear. But in the poetry itself! Guess I was meant to see this as have been skipping through old works by Kamau and Winston Farrell following a brief trip down George Lamming way on the occasion of his memorial service a couple days ago. It satisfies me that young poets of the Caribbean are taking on the ‘baton’.
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Beautiful, thanks for reading and adding your thoughts. Bailey does, indeed, have a powerful voice. She dares to address our colonial past that still affects us today while our former colonizers would rather cover up, deny, or forget.
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