
Today marks the beginning of Holy Week in the Christian Church calendar. During these seven days, the church commemorates Jesus’ triumphal arrival in Jerusalem (Palm Sunday), His betrayal (Wednesday), the Last Supper with his disciples (Maundy Thursday), crucifixion (Good Friday), and ends with His resurrection on Easter Sunday. When we dare to speak truth to power, retribution can be swift. It’s not easy to follow in His footsteps: To love one’s neighbor can come with risks to one’s safety and life. Sometimes, we may also lose what we hold dear.
In my short story “Rescued: An Easter Story,” the protagonist Dwayne Higgins, an innocent man caught up in a crime not of his making, is forced to examine the direction of his life. The story is inspired by a scary incident that occurred during the period we lived in Fortaleza, capital of the Northeastern State of Ceará in Brazil.
The year was 1990. At the time, I was working at a small family-owned international trade consultancy firm. On July 16th, sometime after 2:00 p.m., my estranged husband (hereafter called Husband) called me at the office. He had been robbed at gunpoint at the office of a local cambista (a black market foreign-exchange broker) with whom he worked in downtown Fortaleza buying and selling foreign currency. The bandits seized US dollars and Brazilian cruzeiros, amounting to over forty-one federal minimum salaries. My monthly salary as an import-export assistant was only two minimum salaries.
Several attempts to reach Husband failed. The cambista he worked with claimed that he knew nothing about Husband’s whereabouts. After leaving the office at 6:00 p.m., I picked up our five- and seven-year-old sons at school and told them what had happened to their father. We went to the apartment where Husband lived with his Brazilian amante (mistress). Also distraught, she had not heard from him since his call earlier that afternoon.
Fears of him being locked up in a Brazilian prison or, worse yet, “disappeared” by the police muddied my thoughts. The gravity of their father’s disappearance subdued the boys.
Our shared ordeal ended after nine o’clock that evening. Husband arrived in the company of two burly plainclothes police officers in search of the stolen money. Surprised to see me and the boys, one officer headed into the bedroom with Husband and his amante. The other officer remained with me and the kids in the living room.
In a polite manner, he questioned me about my name, where I lived, where I worked, our country of origin, how long we had been living in Fortaleza, our residential status, how long we were married, how long we were separated, and my relationship with my husband’s mistress. I assumed these questions were intended as verification of the information they had obtained from Husband—their major suspect of the theft. Our sons remained quiet and motionless, seated on the only sofa in the small space.
My sons and I did not get home until after ten o’clock that evening. We had missed a bullet. For now.
Opening Paragraphs of “Rescued: An Easter Story” by Rosaliene Bacchus
Dwayne Higgins stood at the open window overlooking the street in downtown Fortaleza, Northeast Brazil. The sounds from below filled his brother-in-law’s dingy office where foreign currency exchanged hands on the parallel market. An electric floor fan forced air in his direction. Canned ice-cold coke satiated his thirst in the eighty-seven-degree heat.
Thursday of Holy Week. Semana Santa. People clogged the street like a horde of rats burrowing their way amid the shops, searching for Easter bargains. Street children meandered among the pack, snatching watches and purses, disappearing with their loot. Young women flaunted low necklines and bottom-hugging skirts. Storefronts spilled their wares onto the pavement, obstructing the flow. Choked sewers belched up slime, saturating the air with stench.
In Fortaleza, life pulsated in bars and restaurants and on sun-soaked beaches. For the thirty-year-old, black American from San Diego, Southern California, this two-week visit was not for fun seeking. His Brazilian mother-in-law clung to life on a hospital bed, following a heart attack. Gabriela, his wife, spent most of the day at her mother’s bedside. Their four-year-old son stayed at a sister-in-law’s house, pampered by his cousins.
Dwayne crushed the empty coke can. He threw it into the trashcan near the desk and fan. He looked at his watch. One thirty-two in the afternoon. The Reverend Carlos Andrade was due anytime now to exchange his American dollars for Brazilian currency. Dwayne met the pastor last week at his father-in-law’s house.
The buzz of the intercom, from the security desk in the lobby, signaled that the pastor had arrived. Dwayne buttoned up his short-sleeve, cotton shirt. He could never get used to Fortaleza’s hot, humid weather.
The doorbell chimed. Dwayne peered through the peephole. The bespectacled, sexagenarian pastor stood alone on the other side of the door. He unlocked the door. Without warning, the door collided with his face. He reeled backwards. The pastor stumbled into the room, followed by two armed men. The men were about mid-twenties, heavyset, dressed in black suits and ties. They were both about his height, five-feet-eight.
“Do not move!” said one.
“Put your hands up!” said the other, kicking the door shut.
Continue reading at Rosaliene’s Author Website
Note: This story was first published in the now defunct New York-based magazine Guyana Journal April 2009 Issue.

Happy Palm Sunday 🌿🌿🌿
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Thanks very much, Luisa. Hope your Palm Sunday was blessed ❤
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Thanks a lot! It was beautiful!
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That’s great!
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What a harrowing story. Very grippingly written. Life can be awfully messed up.
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Thanks very much, Friedrich. And it gets messier by the day 😦
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One importrant Chinese stratagem is 搅水打鱼 (rao shui da yu) “muddying the waters to fish in them.”
Strategic meaning: Create chaos or confusion to take advantage of the situation.
(But to do that one would need a certain level of intelligence.)
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Thanks for sharing that insight, Friedrich. The working poor and vulnerable communities are usually the ones who will feel the pain the most.
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An intense, scary, expertly written story, Rosaliene. Horrible when someone innocent gets caught up in something like that.
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Thanks very much, Dave. It sure is horrible. These situations happen far more often than we realize.
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You’re undoubtedly right about that, Rosaliene. 😦
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A gripping story so well written – making me grateful that I live where I do.
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Thanks very much, Derrick. Fortaleza continues to be one of the most dangerous cities in Brazil.
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Definitely a terrible memory Rosaliene. There are opportunists everywhere. Thanks for sharing. Allan
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My pleasure, Allan. Opportunists are, indeed, everywhere. They’ve now found creative ways to rob us of our life savings.
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wow….scary and beautifully done
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Kim, thanks very much for dropping by and reading.
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Goodness, Rosaliene, that is scary stuff. 🤗
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Thanks for reading, Ashley. The sad part is that there’s lots of scary stuff still happening today.
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A very well-told story. Good work!
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Thanks very much, Neil. I’m so glad that you enjoyed reading my short story 🙂
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You had me in a growing suspense through the whole story.
The power of pulling together is beyond price.
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Thanks very much, Jasper. It means a lot when a reader is drawn into a story.
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Extraordinary! Thank you, Rosaliene.
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Thanks very much, Dr. Stein! My pleasure as a storyteller 🙂
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Whew! That was a nail-biter, Rosaliene! So glad it ended well. Your stories are riveting but the details about people and place are what make them. Thank you for a great Sunday read!
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My pleasure, Mara 🙂 I’m so glad that you found the story gripping. It was my first attempt at writing a crime story.
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I was on the edge of my seat!
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Mara, that’s great news for a storyteller!
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Brava to you for turning a terrifying experience into a suspense-filled story, Rosaliene. I could feel the humidity and taste the fear.
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Thanks very much, Tracy. I’m happy to hear that I was able to immerse you in the story.
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The juxtaposition of your harrowing story and Holy Week is captivating and this sentence stood out: “When we dare to speak truth to power, retribution can be swift.” Thank you for sharing, Rosaliene and a peaceful week to you.
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My pleasure, Michele. My harrowing story is nothing compared to what Jesus faced following Judas’ betrayal. A peaceful Holy Week to you, too ❤
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Humbly and honestly said. Thank you so much. ❤
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Oooh, the best stories have an element of truth, Rose. Love both of these stories, the real and the imagined! Happy Easter week to you. xo
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Pam, I’m so glad that you enjoyed both the true life and imagined stories 🙂 A Happy Easter to you, too!
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🌸💐🌺🌻🥀🌷🌹
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Excellent but scary story! A redemption story! ❤
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Thanks very much, Dawn. I’m so glad that you enjoyed my story of redemption 🙂
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I did, but hard. Then the Easter story is also a hard story to read!
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Dawn, the Easter story is, indeed, a hard story to read. Christians tend to focus on the happy ending of Jesus’ resurrection.
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It is the victory which keeps us going.
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Great descriptions of the setting and suspenseful story.
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Thanks very much, Rebecca.
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Excellent writing! I felt like tension. I also felt bad for the boys sitting on the sofa. But they needed to know.
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Thanks very much, JoAnna! As parents, we do our best to shield our children from violence, but there are times when they need to know what’s going on.
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I agree.
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You write so beautifully, with tension and yet also uplifting with hope… I wish you a wonderful and peaceful Easter Sunday 🌷
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Randall, thanks very much for reading and for your kind comments 🙂
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You certainly have stories that keep readers hooked, Rosaliene. Blessings to you.
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Thanks very much, Mary 🙂 Blessings to you, too ❤
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A shocking, harrowing story! Your writing is so suspenseful; I was completely hooked! Thanks for sharing. Hope you had a peaceful Easter break 💜😊
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Ada, I’m so glad that you enjoyed my Easter story! I appreciate your kind comments 🙂 ❤
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You’re a great writer, Rosaliene! 🙂
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Thanks very much, Lisa! 🙂
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While your story is utterly captivating, I admire your introductory remarks regarding the Holy week: even those who don’t have a thorough knowledge of the event, end up knowing what the Holy week is about.
Again, your description of people’s conduct when mingling during “Thursday of the Holy week”, makes me think it is how it is, almost everywhere! Same excitement and experience!
Nice story!
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So glad you enjoyed my Easter story, Zet Ar! It’s good to hear from you 🙂 Blessings ❤
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Rosaliene, Thank you for sharing a story that reminds us of both the vulnerability and strength that define the human spirit.🙏
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My pleasure, MMC 2.0. So glad that you enjoyed reading my Easter story 🙂
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