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Fibonacci poetic form, Guyanese-Canadian Poet Leonard Dabydeen, No to Wars, Save our Children, Syrian Crisis
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My Poetry Corner October 2015 features the poem “Rise Up After the Fall” by Guyanese-Canadian poet Leonard Dabydeen. Before migrating to Canada where he is a licensed paralegal, he was a former headmaster and later lecturer at the Guyana Teachers’ Training College. Following his 2012 debut collection, Watching You: A Collection of Tetractys Poems, Dabydeen’s latest collection, Searching for You: A Collection of Tetractys & Fibonacci Poems, was published in September 2015.
The featured poem and the following excerpts are from Dabydeen’s e-book collection, 419 Poems, published in October 2014. While his poetry is mainly free verse, he also works with the modern mathematical poetic forms, tetractys and Fibonacci. Whatever the style, Dabydeen’s poetry lays bare our soul with its longings and broken dreams; its darkness and love’s light.
Written in the first person, “Age” speaks of youth’s disregard for the aged: in tattered clothes / and hobbled knees / and my thinning gray hair / and my frail bone-in body. Perhaps, younger generations should consider:
that your time will come
like ocean waves washing
towards the shore
and leaving a crustacean memory
for those who are yet to come.
For those of us trapped in life’s stampede…in the gathering of things, he reminds us in “Here Today…Gone Tomorrow”:
if mobility means to peddle oneself
in ascent or descent in going places
this we know with certainty
you are here today
and you will be gone tomorrow
as long as memory does not
suffer senility syndrome.
In “Misunderstandings,” the poet exposes the ordeals of being a parent:
What misunderstandings reek the mind
when parents are unable to decipher
how their son or daughter is growing up
how he or she makes decisions that
rupture their sentiments
like a cesarean wound?…
Calling attention to the “Civil Crisis” of the Syrian people, the poet uses the Fibonacci poetic form which hammers home the escalating crisis and demonstrates humanity’s descent into depravity.
Shoot
to kill
everyone
in the district
Syrians must die
no hope for survival
civil outcry they fear not
they will never tolerate this
bombings continue to destroy them
human rights no longer exist for us.
Dabydeen asks in “How Much More…”
Oh! what has man done to man
to emboss him with so much hate and anger?
You ask me as much
as I ask you with a blush of hope
how much more
and for what price?
The featured poem “Rise Up After the Fall” delves into our corrupt minds and souls, affecting all levels of our society. Corruption blinds us to our guilt; leaves us with no shame no shame.
sometimes we become witness
to this blind man in each of us
or innocent if we do not know
how we do what we do when we do
Dabydeen is optimistic that in working together we can rise up after the fall. We have to…for our children’s sake.
To read the complete poem and learn more about Leonard Dabydeen’s work, go to my Poetry Corner October 2015.
Important reminders for all of us, Rosaliene. We can improve things together! Let’s also not forget all our blessings, and all the good things happening e.g. based on UNICEF from 2005 – 2010, the number of people below poverty line was reduced by 500 million pax (> 1/3)!
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Thanks, Cicorm. As the saying goes: United we stand; divided we fall.
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” Life’s stampede …” Great phrase, Rosaliene.
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I wish I could take the credit, Dr. Stein. In the opening lines of his poem, “Here Today…Gone Tomorrow,” poet Leonard Dabydeen writes:
It is like a stampede / how the mind works / in the gathering of things
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Special thanks to you, Rosaliene; and to Cyril B. for entertaining this post. Memory has an uncanny way of nurturing itself with refreshing moment such as this.
~ Leonard Dabydeen
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You’re welcome, Leonard. It has been my pleasure to read and share your poetry with others. Hope lives.
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Thanks for sharing, Cyril. Have a great week 🙂
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Poets re-write history…..maybe that’s why after revolution most are “executed” !
My cynical mind on overdrive…
Write on my brothers and sisters …..we are re-writing history.
Enjoyed palabras of your poem.
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Sadly, Kamptan, it does happen. Oppressive governments fear poets and writers who open the eyes of the people and give them hope.
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Rosie
Salud from sunny espania
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Enjoy the sunshine, Kamptan 🙂
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Hi Rosealiene,
I am really enjoying reading your poetries. You are a wonderful, and exceptional writer you have a big heart you are sharing your experience with other great writers. Each one telling a story of their thoughts. I am proud of you, and all those that are expressing
Their through poetries,,,, God bless you all
Bella
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Thanks, Bella. Please note that the excerpts from the poems quoted in my article are all by Guyanese-Canadian poet Leonard Dabydeen.
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Great truths and powerful wisdom reside in the lines of poet Dabydeen’s writings. Theories suggesting poets are the voice of God are proven correct in what’s presented here.
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Thanks, Jerry. I’m sure that Dabydeen will appreciate your comments.
I agree with you that his poetry is filled with “great truths and powerful wisdom.”
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